The face-to-face close-up CG was excessively used during tense outdoor conversations. I think I saw it used like more than 3 times. It kinda ruined the scene a bit for me every time it popped up. I recommend making another variant. Good game tho dev~ G'luck~
The game is pretty good, but it has a drawback in the pacing and in the building of the momentum. There was not so much setting of the characters. The sound design is good and is a plus to this game and the "waving" of the picture is also a good idea. I should look back into this game when it will be finished.
Okay, I finished playing the game—it's quite short.
Here’s my honest feedback:
Things move too quickly for such a short story.
I dislike that my choices mean literally nothing. I wanted to slow things down, but Aria overrode all my decisions and did whatever she wanted.
I particularly dislike the extreme promiscuity Aria engages in within such a short time frame.
Additionally, I believe you could extend the story by adding more details to key moments. For example, during the truth-or-dare scene, there was just one dare, and she kissed the guy right away. That felt rushed.
The moment she goes to suck the other guy's dick for the first time—doing it while he was asleep—felt odd. He wasn’t even given the option to wake up, follow her, eavesdrop on what she was doing, or just ask her to stop.
One thing I’d really love to see is more build-up.
Right now, the tension feels artificial, not real. Even though the dialogue tells you it’s there, the pacing doesn’t support it properly. There are too few details before, during, and after the hot scenes.
That said, those are my only complaints. You’re doing an incredible job—being so careful and consistent with the art style, adding so many renders to make the story feel more animated.
The mobile phone popping up? Such a great detail. And the fact that, in the future, the MC will be able to move between rooms suggests you're planning something well-thought-out regarding spying on the MC's girlfriend. I can’t wait to see what you’re cooking up.
Dude, you have a lot of talent, and your attention to detail is one of your strongest skills. God, I’d love to work with people like you—those with such a sharp eye for every little detail.
So, if you can add proper build-up, fix the pacing, give more time to the hot scenes, and make the player's choices actually matter—not just in a way where not following Aria’s wishes results in missing out and making the game boring—that would make a world of difference.
Keep it up! I’ve decided to start supporting you on Patreon.
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The face-to-face close-up CG was excessively used during tense outdoor conversations. I think I saw it used like more than 3 times. It kinda ruined the scene a bit for me every time it popped up. I recommend making another variant. Good game tho dev~ G'luck~
v0.4.0
So another generic as fuck AI cuck game. lol
The game is pretty good, but it has a drawback in the pacing and in the building of the momentum. There was not so much setting of the characters.
The sound design is good and is a plus to this game and the "waving" of the picture is also a good idea. I should look back into this game when it will be finished.
Teasing back to back is not doing it for me.
Really cool use of AI art !
Okay, I finished playing the game—it's quite short. Here’s my honest feedback:
Things move too quickly for such a short story.
I dislike that my choices mean literally nothing. I wanted to slow things down, but Aria overrode all my decisions and did whatever she wanted.
I particularly dislike the extreme promiscuity Aria engages in within such a short time frame.
Additionally, I believe you could extend the story by adding more details to key moments. For example, during the truth-or-dare scene, there was just one dare, and she kissed the guy right away. That felt rushed.
The moment she goes to suck the other guy's dick for the first time—doing it while he was asleep—felt odd. He wasn’t even given the option to wake up, follow her, eavesdrop on what she was doing, or just ask her to stop.
One thing I’d really love to see is more build-up.
Right now, the tension feels artificial, not real. Even though the dialogue tells you it’s there, the pacing doesn’t support it properly. There are too few details before, during, and after the hot scenes.
That said, those are my only complaints. You’re doing an incredible job—being so careful and consistent with the art style, adding so many renders to make the story feel more animated.
The mobile phone popping up? Such a great detail. And the fact that, in the future, the MC will be able to move between rooms suggests you're planning something well-thought-out regarding spying on the MC's girlfriend. I can’t wait to see what you’re cooking up.
Dude, you have a lot of talent, and your attention to detail is one of your strongest skills. God, I’d love to work with people like you—those with such a sharp eye for every little detail.
So, if you can add proper build-up, fix the pacing, give more time to the hot scenes, and make the player's choices actually matter—not just in a way where not following Aria’s wishes results in missing out and making the game boring—that would make a world of difference.
Keep it up! I’ve decided to start supporting you on Patreon.
Gentlemen, habemus MAC version! The white smoke has risen, and the wait is over. Rejoice!
Damn. I hope there's more. It's nice and short.
I don't have a PC. Unfortunately. Can we get an Android or Mac version, please?
i agree
I agree
You should add the NTR tag to this so that people can find it easier.
Love the way this has started. Netorase all the way for me. I like the consensus, mutuality and co-operation ... and trust of netorase.
good
Fantastic first release, but I am always advocating for a more netorare rather than netorase experience
Great start! Looking forward to more.
Good luck getting the pacing right, that's usually tricky, but from what I am seeing you are doing well so far.
nice start dev, but please consider adding netorase content.
did you played it? it looks like its going to be a pure netorase game.
Promising first release so I'll follow this one. Can you expand the NTR a bit? Will it be more netorase or netorare?
Is there going to be an android version of this? Please say yes!